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[翻译] “天空未留痕迹,鸟儿却已飞过”

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发表于 2004-4-10 13:53:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

天空未留痕迹,鸟儿却已飞过

  网上有这句话的翻译,各有千秋:
  Without any trace in the sky, the bird has already flown by.

  Before the sky could trail it, the bird had quietly left.

  A bird skimmed by,leaving the sky slightly disturbed.

  The original piece by R. Tagore in his Fireflies is

        I leave no trace of wings in the air,
        but I am glad I have had my flight.

[此帖子已被 圣皮埃尔的男人 在 2004-4-14 10:50:15 编辑过]
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发表于 2005-7-18 12:43:00 | 显示全部楼层

I like the first sentence.

发表于 2005-7-19 01:33:00 | 显示全部楼层

I guess the translation should follow the original meaning, so I support the first interpretation.

发表于 2005-12-19 10:14:00 | 显示全部楼层
The third one.
发表于 2006-3-2 07:56:00 | 显示全部楼层

呵呵   英文翻译都还好   只是中文翻译是否应该是“天空没有留下翅膀的痕迹,但我骄傲我飞翔过”????

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发表于 2006-5-16 11:54:00 | 显示全部楼层
The bird had flown by,  but left nothing !
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